Jahan zaib

Rookie - 82 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Civilized Poem by Jahan zaib


Civilized
Even these wonderful inventions,
The flying iron birds,
Swimming steel fish,
The nests touching the sky,
Could not prove you are Adam,
O man! You are Milton’s Satan,
Planning to destroy,
Or swerve Adam’s off spring,
From the right path,
Of Humanity

Submitted: Friday, February 03, 2012
Edited: Friday, February 03, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Civilized by Jahan zaib )

  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (11/12/2012 11:52:00 PM)

    perfect title for this interesting write..enjoyed this one.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 710 Points Shahzia Batool (3/14/2012 3:22:00 AM)

    Very deep, n thought provoking...keep writing...n thanks for sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Aditi Khandelwal (2/20/2012 2:55:00 AM)

    Really liked this poem...
    We are forgetting our values and have lost our path in the competition...
    Nice write...
    Aditi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (2/3/2012 10:51:00 AM)

    Yeah there z need to seek our right path....man has forgotten his destiny completely...well done u done a great job brief & straightforward touched the heart.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Cockrell (2/3/2012 9:34:00 AM)

    very good... very much true! we have stumbled greatly, and need to find our path anew! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,652 Points Dave Walker (2/3/2012 8:27:00 AM)

    Like this, short and sweet, great poem. (Report) Reply

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