Circle Poem #1. Poem by Mary X
Circle Poem #1.
We walked the street without a care
in the world, me and Daisy. Daisy
and I. We talked
about Nirvana
and Aphex Twin,
philosophy and poetry.
Every road that spewed into us;
we ignored. That was the last day to live.
We carried on walking that road,
walking and talking
until we stopped
and realised.
We walked across the street.
Not a care. We walked across the street.
We didn’t fall. We walked.
A very interesting concept. circle poems- kind of like a figure 8, something worth doing on its own- not used as a vehicle for anything else. i dig your style in this one. expression for the sake of expression is all any poet should strive for. a beautiful piece, thanks
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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so every line has the potential to be the first line or the last line? Exit and entry. Interesting... It seems to work in this poem. I'm impressed.