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Christmas With You - Poem by favie erase

This Christmas i am not alone
This Christmas i have somebody to hold
This Christmas doesn't feel like last Christmas
This Christmas is when I came alive
Last Christmas I was sad
Last Christmas I was lonely
Last Christmas I had nobody to hold
But then This Christmas came
I was happy
I was excited because I had somebody to hold
This Christmas was better with you then without you.

Comments about Christmas With You by favie erase

  • Rookie Majestica Storm (11/22/2013 6:22:00 PM)

    This poem really touched me, it really shows the true meaning of Christmas. It was very very very good Fave. (Report) Reply

    7 person liked.
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  • Rookie Chaotic Life - Curly M. (1/13/2008 8:42:00 AM)

    awwwwwwwww...how sweet
    christmas with u is a great poem
    i never u could be so good at poems Fave
    ur excelent, good job
    voted 10/10 for u and added that as my favorite poem
    : -> (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,014 Points Melvina Germain (1/12/2008 10:15:00 PM)

    This poem shows that sharing Christmas with others is a wonderful thing and hopefully we also remember the true meaning of Christmas. I gave you a (10) for this poem, it also showed how the sadness of being alone can hurt and cause pain. I hope your Christmas's to come will be blessed with love.
    Melvina (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 20, 2008

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