Treasure Island

Cosmic Dreamer

(12/04/1966 / The Cosmos...)

Christmas Magic


Although I wear a christmas smile I am dying inside,
Christmas is not possible whithout magic,
Yet magic is an impossibility whitout love,
For only love is the gift that shall grow and grow,
Love is given freely and requires no fancy wrapping,
Yet this christmas my love withers and dies,
For there is no heart in christmas anymore,
The message has been lost in a tide of tacky gifts,
So my gift remains unwrapped and unclaimed,
I await the day that christmas magic shall live again,
And my christmas smile shall hide nought but love...
Spread the love... The peace will follow...

Submitted: Friday, December 23, 2011
Edited: Saturday, December 24, 2011

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Christmas Magic by Cosmic Dreamer )

Enter the verification code :

  • Unwritten Soul (12/26/2011 7:18:00 AM)

    Cold freezing snow, but look at the snowflakes carefully how they bold the symmetrical beauty even if frozen curse, Look at the snow when it fall over the sky...see how they cant melt as a cloud's tears but as solid ball..if you frozen your sad you will see miracle, like a symmetrical beauty, from heart...it is an art to thankful of what we have. Christmas magic actually has no magic, no magic dust or workable magic wand from santa or whatever...the magic you think it happen is because it from heart, you said you spread love and peace to all...believe it, as they will return to you as the loves back in bundle..you give and people will share for u..So smile, there's always people care for you...we are a big community, a big family where genetic pools only different and variety but in soul we are similar..pure and care each other, if we all believe..._Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/26/2011 6:30:00 AM)

    You spread your love and peace to everyone, of course they will return back to u..now you got many people around to care, to celebrate...so jingle your smile it wont dies jingle not to cry...Be thankful Cosmic, lot of people are having worse life than you, than us for a single hope keep ring the bell of smile, there must be a way to reach a new day, a new day where all your wish to be true...we all here for you Cosmic! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silentpoet Grl (12/23/2011 6:16:00 PM)

    I actually have many thoughts on this poem .... But will just say you captured the feeling so well -So, in one word: Brilliant. Well, I have to add that I think its an amazing poem! (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (12/23/2011 4:46:00 PM)

    A great poem, christmas can do this to you.
    I've spent christmas feeling like this more than
    once in the past. A great write. (Report) Reply

Read all 5 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. What's the half truth of half world, Aftab Alam
  2. A Polar Star to Show Your Way, Jayatissa Liyanage
  3. Walking Is a Way of Life, Frank Avon
  4. Sirpent, Pradip Chattopadhyay
  5. And then there were none, Pradip Chattopadhyay
  6. The Upstairs Witch, David Lewis Paget
  7. Breeze of love, SALINI NAIR
  8. Mt. Eden, Frank Avon
  9. I am in love with you, ambitious blessing
  10. Figurines, Mike Acker

Poem of the Day

poet Rupert Brooke

If I should die, think only this of me:
That there's some corner of a foreign field
That is for ever England. There shall be
In that rich earth a richer dust concealed;
...... Read complete »

   

Trending Poems

  1. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. 1914 V: The Soldier, Rupert Brooke
  4. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  5. If, Rudyard Kipling
  6. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  7. All the World's a Stage, William Shakespeare
  8. Learn to Live, Roopa Menon
  9. Not Waving but Drowning, Stevie Smith
  10. Alone, Maya Angelou

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]