Somebody Insignificant


Christmas Eve Suicide


Twas the night before Christmas
When I’d carry out my wish

In a relaxing hot bath
I’d cut both my wrists

This time I’ll succeed
I’ve planned with such care

Either heaven or hell
Soon I’d be there

My problems and worries
will no longer matter

My tormented life memoirs
written in blood spatter

Submitted: Tuesday, May 20, 2008
Edited: Sunday, August 24, 2008

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Comments about this poem (Christmas Eve Suicide by Somebody Insignificant )

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (9/1/2014 8:19:00 AM)

    I wish u will free in this earth life before that ethereal one... Let your fears go n fly as u were a free bird_soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Caroline Bulleck (12/19/2012 5:16:00 PM)

    I understand how it feels to want to end it all because I tried once. I like your poem. It has a good flow, rhyme, message and it catches and holds my attention. It is a very well written poem that comes from a deep place. It is very sad and tortured, I enjoyed reading it and I like that it is heavy with meaning. I give it a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/20/2008 8:01:00 PM)

    I tried that after the Viet Nam war - it's really a bummer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hiyam Alshiblawi (5/20/2008 8:00:00 PM)

    Its sad, but it says a lot. I liked it (Report) Reply

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