*chocolate Hills First Impression Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

*chocolate Hills First Impression

Rating: 3.4


(summer 2001 Carmen, Bohol)

In a row
Mushrooms without stems
Scattered
Not really mushrooms
But bells
Without ropes
Kissing on a giant sand table

Like a chocolate but not
Like a green strawberry

I can’t describe fully what are they
It’s up to the tourist’s eyes
Either
For t-shirt souvenir
Or mailing post card
And for the blind
They are breasts of our mother earth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 08 May 2009

Bay, maayo kaayo pagka sulat. Believe na kaayo ko sa imo. This piece of work is well written in your own way. I think this is better than my own interpretation...do you think so? How about taking a look at my chocolate hills? Thanks and warm regards,

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