Chitchat Under 20 Poem by zeinab sherif
Chitchat Under 20
It is important 2 talk 2 ur self about ur self 2 know ur self
Omar ibrahim shared a great part of the poem
It is a duet with omar ibrahim.
i love who loves me&who i don't know as long as he didn't hurt me
i miss my grandpa who died in the war, i heard he was clever&kind
i miss my friends as they r always in my mind
really i put them in my family tree
I'm ambitious I want 2 do sth. Extraordinary & great
Sth that will improve the earth's fate
the circumstances r strangling the dream however,
But hope floats on the heart's stream
I imagine what will khofo do if he visited Egypt today
& what will be the excuse we'll say? !
With Egypt started the history
&helping her recover is our destiny
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I think of my father, I think of my mother
they raised, they fed & they gave me a brother
they gave me a bed where I can rest & sleep
I finish my food, they give me another
I'm not a child asking for a toy
All what I need is some peace & joy
A friend that suits a well bred boy
Who his friend left him & went 2 troy
an ambitious poem. there are facts and suppositions. a nice idea and good content. I likek the mention of 'Khofo' you imprint an Egyptian look. keep it up! 10 for your chitchat under 20
A beautiful chat, well -penned and creative. Keep up the good work.
Very Simple, excellent, good flow... Congratulations Rgds Nooruddeen
Sweetheart Your writing is more refined.. I love this cheers. The Sage
Yay! ! ! ! ! ! ! .......I love this master piece a loooooooooot....I hope you can see mine :)
simple poem with tender words.Keep this up and you'll be g8er than WILLIAM himself.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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very well written.. keep on writing u hve the ability.ma wishes r always with u' god bless u