Chirping Music Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Chirping Music

Rating: 4.7


Little birds are chirping,
New morning is turning.
In mother’s nest they are,
Stars have gone very far.

With love they are flying,
In hunger some are crying.
Trying to get some food,
They are caring life good.

Mother is bringing a fruit,
For her child is really cute.
Salute is doing to morning,
In East sun is truly burning.

The sound of flute is nice,
Mice are hearing with price.
Twice they are repeating all,
All are enjoying sky’s call.

In row ants are in gossiping,
In a way nature is profiting.
They are getting grains near,
All are working without fear.

Birds are chirping the music,
For crops now soil is humic.
Cubic path is filled in humour,
God is nice again says bloomer.

Wednesday, February 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: music
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
“New morning is turning to towards the appearance of day. At the same time little birds are chirping. They are in mother’s nest. Morning is turning that is why stars have gone far from sky. Now with love little birds are flying. Some are crying in hunger. They are trying to get some food. In good condition they are caring for life. Mother bird is bringing a fruit. Her child is really cute. To morning mother bird is doing salute. Now in East truly sun is glowing with rays. Sound of flute is nice. Paying the true price to it mice are hearing. They all are repeating the tone of flute twice. Sky’s call that is echo of flute sound they all are enjoying eagerly. Ants are gossiping in row. In a way nature is giving them profit. Near them they are getting food grains. All ants are working without fear. At this morning birds are chirping the music. Now soil is humic for crops. Cubic path is filled with lots of humour. A matured person or as well as a tree who produces flowers at a particular time now says God is nice.” This poem talks about the natural music with above theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 26 February 2015

Like a serene moment near by a natural rivulet. Wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Walterrean Salley 09 July 2015

Great imagery and keen observation. Nature has its own music.

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Kelly Kurt 20 April 2015

A very lovely poem, Bhargabi. Kumarmani must be proud. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Ma Xiaokang 05 March 2015

very nice Rhyming poem! thanks for share! learn from you

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 March 2015

A very beautiful poem indeed. I agree with Jayatissa when he says that the poem is laced with wonderful imagery.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2015

A beautiful description of music and beauty of a new morning................10

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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