Childhood Remains Within Poem by Obed dela Cruz

Childhood Remains Within

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The younger years may fade but childhood remains within
Like a constant trace which can never be erased by time.
Always bound to a paradise that is evergreen
Where all poets never lose any enchanting rhyme.

I remember the time when the glow calls attention
As the nightingale and robin join in one chorus,
The sea reflects the glory of the blue horizon
And the harmony combines with no one to refuse.

The energy I spent in games has never been lost.
Everything I did rewinds unto me like a dream.
I have gained experiences that I can proudly boast,
For they are treasures to keep when comes the moonlight gleam.

O my friends! I can never forget those faithful years,
The times we wished upon the stars as we share our joys!
I cherish the times we group to dry each other’s tears
And satisfy the mute and silent with friendly voice.

Rest assured, all these things I can never forget,
For they are simple precious gems unworthy of trade.
Childhood sings with me in a legendary duet
Like the old times when history is perfectly made.

Thanks to Him who taught me to live and gave what I need.
Now I bear the fruits of summer from being a seed!


(Here's a version with Mr. Luke Easter)

Childhood Remains Within

Where are he younger years and how dare they not remain?
Fleeting, as the flowerbed seems like it went before it came,
Usually a constant traced that can never be erased by time,
Until black/brown turns to gray, clouds covering up my mind.

The juvenile days of marshmallow roasts abandon the stream,
From a paradise bound to be a forest forever no longer green,
Where poets remain like Anacondas, silent enchanting rhyme,
Yet everything must yield to Mother Nature, even Father Time,

As nightingale and robin join in one chorus to usher the moon,
Ocean’s reflect the glory of a blue horizon the sun is too soon,
Their harmony combines where no other species might refuse,
If it was downtown Chicago you would swear it was the blues.

The energy I spent in games never won has never been lost,
Everything I did rewinds with me like a dream there is a cost,
Gained experiences from childhood that I can proudly boast,
At a midnight sandbox I repelled Casper the Friendly Ghost.

Who ever heard of Witch’s and Goblins not making you fear?
O my friends! I’ll never forget those faithful childhood years,
One night we wished upon the stars in the middle of a storm,
Because good friends huddle together & everyone was warm.

Rest assured that all of these friendly memories I shall forget,
They are special precious gems unworthy of trading and yet,
For one more childhood hoop and holler in a legendary duet,
Would I relinquish my wealth for old times, hell yeah you bet.

Thanks to Him who taught me to live and giving what I need,
Now I shall plant the summer fruits for my coming little seed,
To satisfy vicariously from daddy’s offspring one day I’ll see,
Spirit joy filled laughter my parents experienced through me.

Is that not how growth begins and expands within the earth?
Nothing begets anything unless a seed of life is planted first,
Only what is planted will regenerate and determine it’s worth,
Silent darkness of the underground or warmth of the hearth?

Seasons oh seasons, dragging on forever, fall, winter, spring,
As ushering in the summer seemed like your only good thing,
Will always remember my first little league homerun I was 10,
No matter how many years flee, “Childhood Remains Within.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 28 September 2010

Thanks to Him who taught me to live and gave what I need. Now I bear the fruits of summer from being a seed! Amazing the enlightenment you have got from within and from the earth also. Beautifully expressed the eternity. Total a poem simply makes me astonished. No extra jerking of words...smooth but specific....and you have stopped your pen at the right station. Beautiful Obed.....a fantastic experience of good reading. I should stop myself here otherwise that can harm your proceeding. Bravo....write such total poetry as many as possible during a life time. Thank you much. Regards, 10/10 pranab

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Trade Martin 01 October 2010

Strong concept, writing and feeling buddy. I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the fine work. Best regards, Trade.

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Seema Chowdhury 01 October 2010

very interesting poem Oded, i really appreciate the maturity of your thoughts. keep writing, you write so well.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 October 2010

Your command of English is good. (Are you really a Prince?)

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Nathaniel Flying Owl 01 October 2010

this was an excellent write. 'As the nightingale and robin join in one chorus' reminds me of something out of a hymn to God.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 07 July 2011

Hi Obed, i love your poem. Once again your poem inspired me. A true apprecistion of childhood. Nice poem :)

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Marieta Maglas 03 October 2010

A very excellent and poignant write! ...love to read it..Mari

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 October 2010

‘O my friends! I can never forget those faithful years, ’ ~ This line impresses me especially the word ‘faithful’ As age advances we stay concocted and become formal Wear a cloak and mask us i.e. ‘unfaithful’ So it is better to stay glued to Childhood Memories =Truthful a.k.a Faithful … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Obed Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Supriya Prathapan 02 October 2010

Yes it is hard to forget the childhood days. The total freedom from responsibilities. Good one.

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Aldo Kraas 02 October 2010

That poem is very good

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