Cheerful Thoughts Poem by dr. ram sharma

Cheerful Thoughts



CHEERFUL THOUGHTS
Cheerful thoughts like sunbeams,
Lighten up the darkest fears,
For when heart is happy,
There is just no time for tears,
And when face is smiling,
It`s impossible to frown,
And when you are high-spirighted,
You can`t feel low-down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeffrey Lee 28 December 2008

cute, but the last word seems a little weak. suggestion for last line something like 'you just can't feel down'

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Bob Blackwell 28 December 2008

A very happy poem, I like it.

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