Charlie's First Rainbow Poem by Stevie Taite

Charlie's First Rainbow

Rating: 3.5


Gloriously Grubby
Sipping on his Mountain Dew
A picture of contentment
Captured there in my rear view

A day full of adventure
Now a forming memory
He asked whilst glazing blankly
When our next day out would be

I laughed and told him gently
'You look ready for your bed'
He smiled a sleepy smile
Then focused on the road ahead

I spoke of future outings
As we drove on, homeward bound
But sleep soon interrupted
With its laboured breathing sound

I warmly recollected
Many summer days like these
Heading home, exhausted
Windows wound down for the breeze


But this one would be special
As the raindrops hit the bonnet
The horizon up ahead
Had a rainbow painted on it

Now, even though I learnt at school,
What puts them in the skies
The magic of these coloured arches
Still astounds my eyes

The clarity and flawlessness
Not marred by science told
And for Charlie, this would be his first
(he wasn't very old)

I savoured Charlie's wonder
And his eyes sprung open wide
Excitement echoed in his voice
As'follow it' he cried

'But Charlie, its across a field,
I cannot drive that way'
'We have to reach the end', He pleaded
'Please do as I say!

I think it ends right by our house
And so you simply must
Take the quickest route you can.
Oh, come on Mum, FULL THRUST! '

He aired his disappointment
With his ‘off road' route refused
And when I asked him, 'What's the fuss'
He stared at me, bemused

'Mum' He said, exasperated
'Haven't you been told?
That at the end of rainbows
Is the hugest pot of gold! '

Even though I knew it was
To be a pointless chase
My childish heart was hopeful
As we pulled up to our place

The rainbow hung there mockingly
As Sun and showers played
Its end still seemed so far away
And Charlie looked dismayed.

'They do not have an end' I said
'I'll teach you how they're done
So you can make your very own'
He cheered and looked less glum

(We took a picture, Charlie's arm
Stretched out in its direction
Just in time, as drying skies
Put end to natures spectrum)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A true tale, turned into a cute poem for your enjoyment. I hope it reaches the hearts of many a parent, who enjoy seeing the world through their childrens eyes! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A B 17 October 2012

really a cute poem...v become ready to do anything for our kids though we know it would be insensbile though

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Perry Biggerstaff 18 October 2012

The creative simplicity and flow are astounding.

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Ruby Honeytip 07 December 2012

Drip........drip..........drip......... If you listen closely, you can hear my teardrops falling. You are such a great poet Stevie xx I'm sharing this one on my Facebook....YOINK!

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John Brown 29 October 2012

A beautiful poem Stevie. I have helped to raise 5 kids in total, so have many similar tales I could tell, but this just tickled me pink.

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Valerie Dohren 19 October 2012

A lovely poem - a delightful little story. Well written.

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Alla Simone 19 October 2012

Gloriously Grubby...from the first line I was captivated. Simple storytelling takes a turn for the magnificient in this piece. The tone of this poem is nurturing and effortlessly entertaining, as children often are. Thanks for sharing- allowing us to share in the highs, lows, and overall beauty of an adventure at days end.

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Aung Si 19 October 2012

Well.I feel happy when i read this.thank for sharing a true tale, turned into a cute poem for our enjoyment.

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