Chaos Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Chaos

Rating: 5.0


You are a neutron star,
Spinning into darkness
Waiting to explode
Holding onto space for
Not so dear life, but you
Long to turn into chaos
To release your burning heart
Waiting to transform
Into a cannibalistic black hole
On a collision course for Earth
Ready to tear up my gravity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Petranovich 14 September 2011

This was amazing! I love the way you made stars seem! 10++

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Shadow Girl 10 September 2011

Gravity is not worth much if u r not happy with the force. 'It is vain to say human beings ought to be satisfied with tranquility: they must have action and they will make it if they cannot find it. Millions are condemened to a stiller doom than mine, and millions are in silent revolt against their lot.' - Charlotte Bronte (Jane Eyre) .

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Allemagne Roßmann 01 September 2011

Incredible poetry and best way to explain natural disaster in lucid manner.Well done and hats off!

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