Changing World Poem by Subbaraman N V

Changing World

Rating: 5.0


Changing world changeth
Waiting for none to stop!

Do I change or not is the question
If not where do I stand is the puzzle!

Born on the earth to reach a goal
Came to the world to play a role!

Can I change the shape or shape the change
Thoughts relevant in mind to face!

Await not but bring the change
Anticipate the effect of change
Unforeseen may be the end
Understand that is the world!

Be yourself and behave yourself
Keep the good of all, all the while!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daffodil Decarie 29 October 2007

Pretty loud(!) . I guess the feeling is too...

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Raveendran . 27 December 2007

I see, I hear, I feel the power of these words..

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Francis Duggan 02 January 2008

Another good poem here Subbaram you are indeed a thinking person well done again

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Seema Chowdhury 03 June 2008

sir, thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts with all. i really appreciate. it is a very nice poem, thought provoking, gives an opportunity to rethink..........

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Gita Ashok 25 June 2010

Can I change the shape or shape the change Thoughts relevant in mind to face! Use of 'change and 'shape' as verb and noun in the same sentence adds a dramtic effect to the whole poem. The theme is beautiful, the composition is fabulous and to top it all, the message at the end is simple and clear. This is another precious gem in your anthology.

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ata khan 17 April 2009

Great message sir, and in a very good, sweet way Thanks a lot

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Indira Renganathan 07 August 2008

Well said and sounds very poetic too.10

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Kriti Upreti 14 June 2008

nothing is permanent except change excellent poem

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Kesav Easwaran 13 June 2008

time makes changes in all of us; in all our lives...learn to accept not to resist...a poem with a good message...*10*

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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