Changed Poem by Avery Eglantine

Changed

Rating: 4.5


As clouds grew dark
and lightning sparks
As rain approach
with thunder in caroche

Envelop by nobility
yet ironically full of agony
Caught thee with tears
driven by fears

howbeit time was fast
anew the memory rain brought
The agony had lasted
at last Light was sought

As clouds grew dark
I feel so bright
As rain approach
I remember my Light.

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Enjoyed the weird play, nice poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 09 May 2013

enveloped by nobility, good write, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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