What I see
I shall not see
Again
27/3/2009
A fleeting world, like the beauty in all sorts and forms. Nice words to share...Thanks
If i were to be so bold as to speculate the possible underpinning theme, you succinctly, yet splendid, write about here....Is that you have very shrewdly & artistically defined the cold reality of'''TIME'''....Excellent Work, my friend! FjR '09
only change is constant as iqbal says, life is an abstract noun.every body knows but can not confess, you did it
3 lines of powerful words..only the subject can make the change, can decide and could tell if he really see what he sees or he doesn't see what he sees..this is usually happened in a cross examination inside the court.. naizz
may be u have long vision to forcast. yes what u see will never be seen agn. good one dear... i rate it 7
A good short poem yet I felt was unclear about the direction it pointed. A change could be towards positivity or it can also lead to negativity but considering you and myself writers, we must percieve the CHANGE towards a decisive positive turn with fruitful consequences. An inspirational poem...........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer
that being the absolute truth..yet we relate...one we have already seen to...one we are seeing..and even worse one we would be seeing...a fabulous shortie
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Change the only thing thats fixed....a unique way of saying it..lovely