Cesarian Section Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Cesarian Section

Rating: 5.0


Huddled against the cold
we cuddled politely
waiting on a 24 that wouldn’t come.

As the cold got colder
I grew bolder.

“Come here! ” I commanded
& put you inside my coat.

Happy as a happy ever after –
- snug as a bug in a rug.

Intimate cuddling
a la cliché.

“I feel like I’m your baby! ”
you grin from somewhere deep within me.

Then all too soon the bus that wouldn’t come
comes

&

reluctantly

I

give birth

to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Dee Wright 13 April 2008

Such a beautiful evocation of love...and so surprising from a male being couched in female terms. I think you are a seahorse...swimming up the Thames! This is startling with its beauty and how that little action blossoms into the image of you giving birth...its so touching and gentle and tender. Sob...sorry a little tear. You catch the tentative first little seedlings of love as they ache to come into existence. Such a beautiful beautiful poem. I am so moved by it. love Debs

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alice sunderland 03 May 2007

excellent to read - except for the 'jealousy' im feeling.

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Mandira Mitra 03 May 2007

Hey! nice one.Separation was never easy.

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Francesca Johnson 03 May 2007

Very good. And I mean VERY good. Those last couple of lines were excellent... Will read more of yours, Donnall. Love, Fran xx

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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