We've only met the earth once
We don't know the world well
An area twice the size of mind
We're asleep though rebel
Sleep walkers first we are
Last awake we will be
Twice a mo twice a sec
Twice a life
Agree
(2009/2/2)
v well written.......... philosophical poem... but im not agree with you dear cuz mind is worth than the world.... this world is in our hands + 10
We certainly have a lot ro learn from the world - - and the questions this poses gives us all pause for thought.... fine poem - - - Fay...10
a very nice write indeed and thought provoking....thanks for sharing 10 rgds asif
P rovoking thought e ntails apprehensions r ocking the mind s o broad i nstills soul searching a man can learn n othing if he does not care!
I agree of this statement.....cells met once , that we talk about
i agree of ths statement.....cells met once, that s f we talk about genetics.....so, xy xy follows....ths s what i understand to this piece.... naizz
You have a way with words and your way is more than worthy of a ten. Kindest regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The big philosophy looks us from this small verse, Nightingale... 10.......... Best wishes, Tsira