#cause And Effect- Haiku Poem by Mamta Agarwal

#cause And Effect- Haiku

Rating: 2.9


High pollution
Kids wheeze and city coughs-
Mind full of smog

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 November 2008

Pollution's effect on nostrils and lungs is apparent but it's effect on human mind is occult and very harmful and so on heart as well...!

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Lauren R 13 November 2008

tying the mind to the lungs to the kids...the lifesources of the human world. very nice.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 13 November 2008

excellent....how very true.

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premji premji 13 November 2008

SMOG is an engineering term which we use frequently in Automobile Engg. (smoke+ fog) ... lovely haiku and i appreciate your concern for young lungs and nature. oil is the blood of earth and we have already punctured her heart! her lungs: the amazon forest is almost felled down... gone...sure nature will fight back with epidemics, natural calamities.. 10+++

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Marvin Brato 13 November 2008

M-ainly though provoking a profound observation m-any did not mind t-hat there is death in the air a-t everywhere! a 10

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