Causalities Of Love Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Causalities Of Love

Rating: 5.0


Casualties of love:
The broken heart,
The weary soul that sinks,
The formerly happy rhythms
Of a positive life
Turning slow and morose.

If a friend
Mentions he saw you
And says her face is thin
And the brightness
Of her eyes
Has faded
Into tears of regret,
My own sadness
Will become intense.

One day,
We’ll meet
Simply for tea,
And I’ll bring you flowers.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 05 August 2009

Lovely and thoughtful indeed! 10+

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 August 2009

One day, We’ll meet Simply for tea, And I’ll bring you flowers. Simply beautiful! I wish I could have written these lines..........10/10. Regards Naseer

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Sandra Fowler 26 July 2009

Lovely write...your last lines are your best lines.10/10. Kind regards, Sandra

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Tai Chi Italy 23 July 2009

I hate relating too closely with such awesome poetry Uriah! and then bursting into happy tears with the last stanza, is just too much...You are romance... smiling at you Tai

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