Caught In The Wind (Revised) Poem by Heather Burns

Caught In The Wind (Revised)

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Life grabbed a heart
twisting and twirling

until shards fell
along its pathway

stepping aside
restoration began

but incomplete

like a broken mirror
a thousand pieces

caught in the wind
and blew away.






















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Sunday, September 8, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tribhawan Kaul 08 September 2013

wonderful write on life and its ups and downs.

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Somanathan Iyer 08 September 2013

certain incidents in life, when they appear beyond repair, thoughts surface in an emotional way. Nice write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 08 September 2013

Beautiful write Heather..Life is full of twists and turns, upside down too. Sometimes leaving one shattered like mirror broken into many pieces. Loved it.

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David Wood 10 September 2013

The mirror cracked can never be repaired, but a wounded heart can be mended in time.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 September 2013

Analogy drawn with the pearly words to the life is so beautiful, Heather burns this is he beautiful poem shared with us here thank you deserve to get hundred percent

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Vipins Puthooran 09 September 2013

like a broken mirror a thousand pieces caught in the wind and blew away. Excellent poetry! ! !

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Vipins Puthooran 09 September 2013

like a broken mirror a thousand pieces caught in the wind and blew away. Excellent poetry! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 08 September 2013

Just like what wind passed on my face now...broken and healed...beautiful write! ! ! again! _Soul

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