' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Catching The Sunlight Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Catching The Sunlight

Rating: 2.6


The sunlight
arranges its shadows

delicately placing them
in position

as it were of the utmost
importance as to just

where they should go.

I feel like an intruder

as if I had
caught the sunlight

at an inopportune
moment

stepping from the shower
& reaching for a towel.

I tried to be
as invisible as I could be

not to
exist

the least little bit.

Only a silently
falling leaf

dared to say
anything at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 26 October 2009

Sunlight, shadows, falling leaves.....this could be a song....do you know the song, 'Falling leaves'. Matt Monroe sang it.....beautifully. You paint a delightful picture. Ruthie

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Scarlett Treat 23 October 2009

As ever, you evoke that 'otherworldness' to sunlight, shadows, falling leaves...and your readers, who have a chance to peek over your shoulder at ths arrangement, like a still life painting come to life for our pleasure (or pain!) . What a wonderful writer you are!

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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