Catacombs Of My Mind Poem by louis rams

Catacombs Of My Mind

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i feel you tip toeing through
the catacombs of my heart.
which is where you had gotten your start.

now you walk through
the catacombs of my mind
of every waking moment
and every sleepless night.
no matter how i try to forget you
or keep you from my sight.

you continue the walk in my mind
searching for anything left behind.
and picking up the pieces
that you find, of the love i left behind.
what is a heart and mind supposed to do
when 'it is so in love with you'.

the softness of your lips
the gentleness of your touch
the look in your eyes
all of this makes me realize.

that you are the only one in my life
that makes me complete
and of that, no one can compete.

so continue to walk through
the catacombs of my mind
for i will love you till the ends of time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 18 October 2009

Brilliant concept in an attempt to define our subconscious mind.. Depth of feeling well relayed.Nice poem.10.

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 October 2009

Brilliant flow and amazing feel, combined together made this piece wonderful. Great crafting.

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sweet piece of remembering the makings of love..

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