Cat And Mouse Poem by Jacqui Broad

Cat And Mouse

Rating: 4.5


I am the mouse running from the cat,
or am I the cat chasing the mouse?
According to Chinese astrology I'm a Rat,
so who is the boss of the house?
Cat and mouse, chasing in my head.
Who I am? I don't know. It's better to forget...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 31 December 2011

Hello! To speak frankly i say Your Indian dove is boss of your house yet is you who is the boss of my heart... ha! ha! : :) :) :) A rocking philosophy is elicited here. i love your play of words. it is really stylish and meaningful question. Just not only open mails four but open your Heart's door. So simple you will get the answer! :) :) and Happy New Year to you my...................

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Rigzin Namgyal 02 January 2012

..no doubt about that...u play with words.. ..a 10 again..

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Asif Andalib 14 January 2012

I think Gordon Tseng's comment is the best on this poem! A wonderful poem indeed!

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Gordon Tseng 12 January 2012

You are the Poet in the house, i.e., sometimes the cat, sometimes the mouse... ^-^

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Wahab Abdul 12 January 2012

different type of theme...shall i call it an inovation..in terms of choosing the theme..very good use of laguage...good use of logic too... i like the poem...very nice poem among many average poems....please read my comment...

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Eric Cockrell 05 January 2012

good question, indeed! love your wry sense of humor!

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

[Bring all your blues unto my hand As I'm the king of this night I'll make your heart so bright Wherever you be in this forsaken land I'm the king of this night-moonlight] I like your poem! ! ! ! !

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