Castrate The Crayon Poem by Stevie Taite
Castrate The Crayon
Stalking in the shadow of syllables
Drooling at the curves of translucent lines
Slipping your warped finger under the hem of stanza
You transverberate through every victims creation
And the tight fit of their text
Makes you hold your poison pen
In sexual frustration.
What it produces is wasted semen
Ejaculating a commentary of callous cum
And the intelligent poems pity you
As you cannot control your
Sordid stirrings
Your crusted marks of degradation are wiped away with deepest disdain
You think you are so very clever
With the disguises you don.
So as to remain elusive and unstoppable in your destructive desires
If I could, I would find a way to castrate your crayon
Then the beautiful poems would feel safe once again!
And their pure embodiment can lay out in the scripted sun
without fear of your perverse eye peering upon them.
Srevie, this is amazing! I haven't read anything more stirring and it brings me to a sudden pause. What an eye-opening and thought provoking piece! I truly love it! Great Ink! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.
Outstanding use of oppositional pairings of words.. the sexual energy in this piece is just right...not too little.. not too much. My kind of stufff.
Strong and evocative, might be best not to share it with your students!
Powerfully done. Seems so agressively unlike anything else I've read of yours so far. Would love to know what caused it.
Powerfully done. Seems so agressively unlike anything else I've read of yours so far. Would love to know what caused it.
Forthright and powerful writing about stuff that matters to you and us as artists. You rock!
i wish i could understand this as well as the last two commenters seem to. should i watch my crayon?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 10:31:38 AM # 1.0.0.1119
wow i don't know what to say this is great, how like really how did you come up with this, you seem to get better by each piece you post, this is a great piece of poem in my opinion