Carrot In You Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Carrot In You



No room to plant a small tuber for light
in my garden of sight blocked of views
sun has not known for years.
Bulid no more root of faith through the
cracks in time now here carrots for eyes
to hear.

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Emancipation Planz 23 December 2008

Bulid? ? ? are they Tulip off shoots... you should try some rhizomes instead of tubers for a change... rhizomes, rhyme zones... nah.. never mind... I's C they don't hear smells.. maybe bells... nah. tink I have had too much egg nog... but Merry Christmas and aroha xx

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James McLain

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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