Carpenter Thoughts Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
Carpenter Thoughts
Hugging her knees
Sat on the floor
A melancholic smile
She wore
Her eyes were tinged red
In the bosom of the gore
Down the cheeks
Her tears tore
Carpenter thoughts
Into her heart bore
Holes of sadness
Depression and sore
Where the heaven is?
In the embrace of the shore
Just keep open
The hope and faith's door
5/20/2012
So beautiful, I can feel the whole poem moving through me. Thank you!
Just keep open The hope and faith's door.... Seeing into within Haste swoons to wrest Wishes defrayed Ebb awaits to shore...wonderful write by imagery and metaphor,
A very beautiful poem with rare blends of diction, lyrical charm and what not..
Just keep open The hope and faith's door .......................................................... Hi, nice words, Amir, best wishes, Ts.
Awesome, I read some of your poems, they are full of sense. I Love them. I'm speachless...very good :)
sadness in poems is sadness in life... it`s an awful way... i know... during last three months i was in depression, i felt myself dead and lost reasons to live. but today i rise for myself, for my angels and people need and love me... be open... and meet sadness just in poems :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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