Carmen Is Her Name Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Carmen Is Her Name

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It’s hard for me to start a poem with this person
because of her stillness
I don’t know what to say about her simplicity
with greatness in her soul
What will be the opening wherein she can melt us
with her smile of serenity
Where does her humbleness come from
in which she has an extraordinary ways?

I don’t know about her,
but all of us can reach her
and meet on the ground
like down-to-earth character
We can’t recognize her,
but she has innate gifts and talent
to use not for her sake,
but for the benefits of others
I haven’t seen her blowing
and embracing her higher degrees
yet she helps and works from the lower level
She carries burdens and encounters
like a furnace of problems,
but she has inner peace to overcome it
which impossible to handle.

I have no idea what to say,
but she plans her big responsibility
kneeling down for her nothingness.
I feel her deep concern just like a mother,
a sister, and a best friend
in which she has initiative to come
to you with an open heart.
She would not ask for return
whenever she gives gifts or help
and she has equal treatment
whatever status you have.
She blends in our funny things,
mixing with us with craziness
and join in some jokes discretely.

Carmen Is Her Name
Friday, July 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: name
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 23 July 2015

Fantastic illustration of a nice personality. She would not ask for return whenever she gives gifts or help and she has equal treatment whatever status you have. Perhaps we cry for such human being who keep her always awake beside our tormented soul. Thanks for sharing.

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C. P. Sharma 19 July 2015

A beautiful dedication to a beautiful person.

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