Careless Words Poem by jon terry

Careless Words



For years your soul's been weeping
Wondering lands so cold and and dark
searching for the pieces
Of an angels broken heart
Two careless words were spoken
Which tore your life apart

So running to your mother
To beg that it's not true
Five crying words from trembled lips
Do I belong to you

The world turned black
The sky fell in
For a girl so soft and meek
As she saw the first tear
Fall on her mothers cheek

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a true story
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ellias Anderson Jr. 12 August 2012

Tragic and Dramatic! it shows a deep clear meaning...it starkly goes through our hearts..well done!

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Godfrey Morris 02 August 2012

Touching and dramatic

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Unwritten Soul 01 August 2012

Touching, deep and clear....it really a good write, with a sentiment hanging on readers' mind_Unwritten Soul

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Urshula Davis 30 July 2012

WOW! This is touching!

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