Candy Shop Poem by Diana Holinski

Candy Shop

Rating: 5.0


It's Aunt Nora's birthday
She's partial to Belgian chocolates
I go with mama
To the candy shop
'We're here to get a present
for Aunt Nora, ' she admonishes.
'Don't even ask for candy! '
And I promise.

But once inside,
the aroma of the place
The gleaming display cases
Candies winking at me
Like jewels

I know she'll say no
But I just have to ask!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

D an unarming simplicity... D you belong here keep the pen pumpin'''

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Duncan Wyllie 27 February 2008

The gleaming display cases Candies winking at me Like jewels...every Childs wonderland A great write Love duncan X

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