Candy 'N I Poem by Eman obied

Candy 'N I

Rating: 4.5


As I walked coyly into a thrilling candy shop
Brimming with children so amazed
that their eyes would fully pop
i carefully observe chocolates
while reaching out for a lollypop
I sink into what I call
A late childhood of mine
As excitement washes me
n' drifts me I fail to look behind
Nevertheless, I do look behind
I send my glimpes around
I decide that vision and taste
are now to bound
I reach for a an enchanting destant bar
My height isn't supporting
Yet, I get the aptitude
I clutch it.it isn't too far
Shall I just unwrap it here and now
Or wait in the queue,
with an anxiously Raised brow
No, I fail to endure
I need my candy
If only I had patiece
It would have been handy
Candy oh
Candy oh
Oh candy
Too sweet
Too sugary
Too addictive!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
isam Abdelrahman 30 August 2012

Real and honest self-saying, a jumping-over poetic clogging poem.Greetings

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Marieta Maglas 01 June 2012

nice and very very sweet, thank you for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 18 May 2012

very nice and cenductive..... :) nostalgic and charming nice write :)

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Hans Vr 12 May 2012

Nicely written. I am of to the kitchen. I need some candy urgently :)

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Joseph Anderson 04 May 2012

There's nothing wrong with having a sweet tooth.I enjoyed this light-hearted expose. Keep writing and enjoy that candy

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