Candy Coated Dream Poem by Nyrical Poet

Candy Coated Dream

Rating: 4.8


Such bitter sweetness falls within a candy coated dream
the place where hope extends beyond the sugar coated scheme
as we dance and dance, around the candy cane sticks
Prancing hand in hand, as we come to one we both lick
Love blooms as we meet in a kiss, like in Lady and the Tramp
Our candy kingdom ruled by two, as the umpa lumpa's dance
We walk through the land, and gaze forever into each other's eyes
And then climb the steps to ride down the milk chocalatey slide
Landing in a pool of such wonderfully pure sweetness
We embrace in a hug, that like the chocolate, is made of pure greatness
As I watch you get out of the pool covered in chocolate like a 100 Grand
Looking like my favorite candy, which melts in my mouth, not in my hand
We laid together on the ground like a twizler all rolled up in one
Both nibbling at each other, until our hearts both became undone
Forever to this day I will declare you my lollipop queen
Such beautiful sweetness falls inside a candy coated dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jenny Kurk 04 June 2007

i like ur poem! very sweet! is it a free verse?

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Tulika Jain 28 April 2007

Well this is a really sweet dream! Good flow and rhythm.Good rhyming.You have followed all the rules of poetry by book. It's a wonderful poem. Keep up the good work.

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Leila K 22 April 2007

Mmmmmmm......candy cane n chocolate...dreamy creamy and ohhh so yummy.....whats ur secret......beautiful poem...real sweet.....mouthwateringly sweet...........love LeilaXXXXX P.s...the mention of chocolate most definitely gets u 10....

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Patricia Gale 26 October 2006

Loved it, so well thought! I must remeber to put some skittles beside my bed, then maybe I can have a candy coated dream...lol Wonderful done Nick!

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Aisha Sherazi 03 October 2006

This is very creative and romantic. Great job Nick! Peace, Aisha

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