Candle In My Heart Poem by Catrina Heart

Candle In My Heart

Rating: 5.0


Hear me speak the words I couldn’t utter
Hear me sing the songs of my heart

Hear my speech, hear my scream
Hear the whispering prayers of my tears

On the green grass where my feet rest upon
Lies my sweet love who is dear to my eyes

Beaded salty waters mutely surging down to my cheeks
Blurring my vision, my heart, to see and to believe

On the marble where your name was inscribed
Where the letters of golden brown fades away

Covered with dust and withered petals of flowers
But your memories remain always the same

Playing in rewinds stealing my mind
Days of sorrow are the tears of candle in my heart


5th of December,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 05 December 2009

Ahhhh, such a lament my dear Catrina! ! ! ! touchy and a good feeler. lovely.10

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pablou marger 05 December 2009

wow, what a wonder ful touch of feeeeeeeeeeelinggggggggs.

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Meggie Gultiano 05 December 2009

Hear my speech, hear my scream Hear the whispering prayers of my tears ...................................... you wrote this with pain in your heart..Sad to say, it is only a whisper..a scream and reading this, i feel the heaviness too here inside of me. A touching write..

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Sandra Martyres 05 December 2009

This poem activated my tear glands too...a very touching piece Catrina...

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Daniel Kempson 05 December 2009

Catrina as beautiful a piece as ever 10 Daniel

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fleur de lys 15 December 2009

So very beautiful Catrina and so full of romance...

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Patti Masterman 05 December 2009

wow so lovely! such a way with words you have.(smile)

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Lady Grace 05 December 2009

hear the words of the swaying leaves my sweetheart for in each tune the sound of silence breaks for each blade whether a round, oval and elongated these give a sound of music... and every dropp of tears where you find me there my heart sees you every day every month of a year for in thy paths made of thorns still the rose sits in throne... for in this rose, its face is you my sweetheart and the fragrance spreads all over the world like the candle it melts but shines temporarily lighten the pages of time...

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Fay Slimm 05 December 2009

Touching the core Catrina - - a very moving piece....10 Fay

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Tsira Goge 05 December 2009

Beautiful mourning at you, Catrina.. 10.... Tsira

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