Cancer Poem by louis rams

Cancer

Rating: 5.0


he went to the doctor because of
a pain in his chest.
they gave him a physical and ran every test.
the doctor told him:
the results will come back within one week
then we'll sit and we'll speak.
the results came back, just like he said
and with it bad news, of which he had dread.

CANCER! how can that be, i am only thirty three.
what will happen, what can i do.
i have a family just like you.
what will happen to my children
and my lovely wife, how will she
survive in this uncertain life?

two kids to raise and her husband not there.
what is GOD thinking, does'nt he care.
i'll accept death, be it as may.
but i always dreamt with my children i'd play.

now with the bad news he had to face the family.
should he tell them the truth, or tell them a lie.
but sooner or later he would die.
that night with tears in his eyes
he told his family he was going to die.
the time i have left on this earth only GOD can tell.
and if i'll go to heaven, or if i'll go to hell.

so while i am here, i want to share my entire life
with my family, because with you is where i want to be.
we're going to do all the things that we've
never done before, like take a trip to the shore.

all the sports that we wanted to do
fishing, boating, hunting, hiking
and just some quality time all alone.
for i don't know when i'll be coming home.

i want you all to remember this:
this is not words of good-bye
for we'll see each other on the other side.

CANCER: THINK ABOUT IT BEFORE YOU TAKE THAT DRAG
FOR IT MAY BE YOUR VERY LAST.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elsa Bennett 02 June 2009

A sad, heartfelt poem here... Wonderful work. Thankyou.

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Christine Kerr 02 June 2009

Very interesting Louis, This poem will surly hit a core with everybody. Once more you made another impact on my life for I quite for 6 months and now I'm struggling all over again. Another job well done 10++++

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 October 2009

Giving up is psychic cancer. Poet didn’t give up, made thumbs down to cancer. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita Thanks for comment on my poem. Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv

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Sandra Fowler 05 June 2009

Written with passion. One can only hope that your warning will be heeded. There is really only today. It pays to be aware of tomorrow.10, of course. Kind regards, Sandra

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 June 2009

Hmmm..........life is uncertain.......................only death is uncertain..........A Good Write

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Kranthi Pothineni 02 June 2009

Very emotional write. Felt its each word deeply. Well penned.

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i lost my dad a few month's back..he had a different cancer.not the lung...he was 73...infact he died not able to withstand the chemo therapy treatment...you have told a sad story and very naturally...please read my 'the chemo therapy' 'losing a baby'

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