' Cancer (10 Words) ' Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

' Cancer (10 Words) '

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Resting on bed
smiling
to greet visitors
awaiting
my death!

Thursday, June 14, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doris Cornago 30 December 2013

I like the briefness of this poem. Truly sickness and death are two things we can't speak much about.

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Marvin Brato 27 October 2013

Yes sir, I used bears as verb (to show) not noun (animal) . Thank you for reminding!

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Bri Edwards 03 October 2013

i suppose this is supposed to be a serious and maybe sad poem, but i could not help thinking (after reading bears) about the fairy tale little red riding hood. in it a wolf, disguised as grandma, in grandma's bed, awaits an unsuspecting young granddaughter. the wolf plans to lure the girl close enough to the bed that the wolf can grab her and eat her! but i think Marvin may have been using bears as a verb, not a noun. who knows? i'll try to have time to look at some more of these little poems. thanks for sharing. :)

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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