Can You See Poem by Manonton Dalan

Can You See

Rating: 5.0


beautiful flower
from my garden
i poured all my love
to have a bloom

then a lovely maiden came
with smile on her face
took it away
to be forgotten on crystal vase
withering out of beauty

while i nurture
my garden again
with too much hope
to spring a bloom
and maiden will
come to kiss my hand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Analou Pabalate 30 September 2008

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ok.....ok........meron ka rin palang garden..........

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Cherry Sha 24 October 2008

flower ws meant to be given to the maiden i guess so let her keep it the way she wants... :) quite a beautiful one.. GREAT!

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Prasetya Utama 09 October 2008

Flower, garden and love through hope of kiss your hand. Beautiful poem.

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Little Hatila ;) 05 October 2008

very beautiful...i really enjoyed reading it....10 Hataw

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Little Hatila ;) 05 October 2008

very beautiful...i really enjoyed reading it....10 Hataw

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Anna jonson 05 October 2008

goooooooood poooooooemmm......... well said...

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