Can You Hold An Ocean? Poem by Autumn Winds

Can You Hold An Ocean?

Rating: 5.0


Look into my eyes
But hold her hand
With a laugh and giggle
Moving closer
We're face to face
But to who?
I have you
But can I keep an ocean like you?
Wild and untamed
Fluid and ever-moving
Will you claim another
Or will I stay barely breathing
At your surface?
Sliding gently across the sand
While others hold on and fail
But if she survives
Will I?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 July 2013

It's a pleasure to read this gem of a piece! I have you But can I keep an ocean like you? Wild and untamed Fluid and ever-moving Fantastic thought of a bewildered lover, you take the reader with your musings... But if she survives Will I? ...My God! What a difficult question uttered so easily! Well done,10/10

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