Can You Poem by Ajay Srivastava

Can You

Rating: 5.0


Sun is in full form bright shine.



Sun want to say 'can you shine like me'.



Suddenly electrifying ray appeared from dark cloud. Electrifying converted entire atmosphere. Can you change atmosphere like me.



It start raining, people come out from home & there thrill is watching.



Rain in itself, feel is so proud.

rain is 'asking can you show thrill' like me.



In a few second a half circle appeared in the sky.



Oh it's rainbow & want to say i am simply colorful.



Tiny boys playing with water, there innocent smile on there faces.



These little boys are in there heaven.

Can You
Tuesday, October 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: desire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 28 October 2015

Verily, everyone is able to do something, A lovely poem with lovely imagery.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 October 2015

Beautiful narration and flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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