Electric Lady


Can We Get Married Now? - Poem by Electric Lady

You let me lose myself in the moment
When all is forbidden
There is no love lost between us
And we are both emotionally aware of that
My heart speaks and you listen
As the doors open and the windows close
I am free to be in your arms
And under your spell
A spell that remains unbroken
I am tied to you with no strings attached
The fantasy is more powerful than the real thing
In my mind I know
There is no other thrill
You make me the fool that I am
And I am that fool
You are the only one I can trust
To tear me apart when I am down
Somehow the universe understands
What we mean to each other
Love is not always right
It is wrong on so many levels
Yet you are the reason my heart speaks
Close the doors and open the windows
Let the air illuminate
Love is the life that we live for
Therefore we shall celebrate.


Comments about Can We Get Married Now? by Electric Lady

  • Bronze Star - 2,312 Points The Princess (5/1/2015 7:37:00 PM)

    I absolutely love this poem...I stumbled upon it. Each and every one of your poems is superb...love the way you express love in this one! ...Keep writing you do it so well! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,461 Points Kumarmani Mahakul (2/12/2015 11:19:00 PM)

    Love is the life that we live for
    Therefore we shall celebrate. Really very much interesting and wonderful presentation. Congratulations as your poem is selected for the poem of the day. this is the matter of happiness. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,074 Points Lyn Paul (2/12/2015 4:10:00 PM)

    Such power and passion in these words. Such truth in the last two lines.......... Oh Happy Valentines Day Electric (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (2/12/2015 12:06:00 PM)

    This is a celebration of love. Great write, l like it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,034 Points Kim Barney (2/12/2015 5:51:00 AM)

    Lovely poem and well deserving of being Poem of the Day. Congratulations!
    By the way, in case you were unaware, you are mentioned in my poem POETRY HEAVEN.
    Keep on writing! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,753 Points Ken E Hall (2/12/2015 3:33:00 AM)

    Love the candour of your love words close the door thatlove web we are all stuck to thank God...great and thanks
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,947 Points Rajnish Manga (2/12/2015 3:20:00 AM)

    It is the beauty of human relationships that we may have certain shortcomings but in spite of that we crave for each other to give longevity to our love life. I would like to quote: I am tied to you with no strings attached / There is no other thrill / You make me the fool that I am / And I am that fool / Yet you are the reason my heart speaks / Therefore we shall celebrate. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/12/2015 2:58:00 AM)

    every moment we must celebrate (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,082 Points Mandolyn ... (9/11/2014 9:00:00 PM)

    this is my favorite one of yours. the poem that is...
    not the title.
    get married? eww.

    ; -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,195 Points Chinedu Dike (9/8/2014 1:28:00 PM)

    Lovely poem illuminating the essence of love. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,363 Points Mr. Nobody (9/3/2014 9:16:00 PM)

    Yeah, bust out the beer! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,468 Points Sekharan Pookkat (8/30/2014 8:02:00 AM)

    Close the doors and open the windows
    Let the air illuminate love
    Love the life that we live for
    And celebrate love in this beautiful world - I like the concept (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,162 Points Mihaela Pirjol (8/29/2014 6:48:00 AM)

    A lovely poem celebrating Love...I enjoyed the read. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 29, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 29, 2014


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