Can This Be Love? Poem by Heather Burns

Can This Be Love?

Rating: 3.5


I watch you across the room
Thinking your gorgeous

longing to approach you
touch
feel your skin

notice how your clothes
fit your body
I undress you with my eyes

perfect balance

the way you smile
little gestures you make

makes me blush with desire

I get nervous when our
eyes meet

my candle burns brightly

I long to get acquainted
know you better

when looking at you I see
perfection

everything I have ever wanted
looks back at me
can this be love?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesus Diaz Llorico 04 September 2013

Absolutely, this is real love. So exciting to read, it is simply so beautiful, it makes one smile just imagining it. Amazing write.

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Valsa George 04 September 2013

Oh! Highly romantic! Yea, it makes one smile! !

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David Wood 05 September 2013

This is how I felt about my late wife. Lovely poem.

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Jodie Hardy 05 September 2013

Ooh I hope so, how wonderrful to love so passionately. Good write x x

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Queeny Gona 06 September 2013

Very passionate write dear ma' am and i loved each and every line of this muse for thebeauty of its expression in mesmirizing words.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2018

I had a typo in my comment, Heather, that must be DESIRE. Thank you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2018

This could be love, sure. I have enjoyed the way you built up this gorgeous poem, WOW! Tender sweetest words, but filled with true desore for love, very romantic, Heather! A 10 and much much more.

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Guy Dimitri Jagodinski 10 September 2013

Attraction fools us sometimes until we feel the burning of our hearts. Nice poem

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Sallam Yassin 07 September 2013

when you are not certain and in doubt that is what the love is all about/ bright

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 September 2013

Wow, A Romantic poem with a lovely flow...Love the way you picturised it beautifully.Loved reading it.

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