Can'T Believe Poem by Valerie Dohren

Can'T Believe

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I can’t believe that you are gone
For you are all around
You’re here in everything I see
In every passing sound

It cannot be that you no more
Could ever speak or sing
Your words will always nourish me
To soothe and comfort bring

And as you kiss my eager lips
With breath as sweet as rain
Your hand takes mine, and then I know
I’ll feel it there again

Still living yet within this room
Still sitting in your chair
You’re watching every move I make
Yes, you are everywhere

And as I lay upon my bed
All through the silent hours
I know that you are with me still
Your scent is in the flowers

You’ll always be within my world
And here within my space
As death shall not divide, my love,
Nor steal away your face

For in my mind your presence dwells
Always within my heart
You walk beside me every day
For we shall never part

I won’t believe that you are gone
I’ll never let you go
You’ll always be right here with me
Or else I’d miss you so

Thursday, March 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 07 March 2014

Sometimes when we lose someone it just feels like they was taken too soon, all our moments makes it feel like they are still here with us, their soul could very well be still here watching over us. A very moving poem, a fantastic write.

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Susan Lacovara 07 March 2014

Perfectly penned and found at just the right moment....you words, to help to ease the heaviness of a heart. Like looking the through th stained glass o your soul...I will keep this poem to my list if favorites...the sentimental sweetness I am so glad you shared. PEACE

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Kanav Justa 08 March 2014

, , , your poems are truly amazing, , , this one made me sad, , : (

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Edwina Reizer 08 March 2014

Valerie, I love this poem. The words are so endearin and the rhyme scheme is great. Edwina Reizer

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Thomas Carolan 06 March 2014

that is a lovely poem well penned and from all of the heart well done thomas

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Yash Shinde 04 April 2014

....a beautiful romantic piece...........beautiful words and imagery gives life to this poem..........

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Amitava Sur 20 March 2014

Such a lovely description of the sweet memories keeping the beloved well within the heart. So endearing to read the lines..... You’ll always be within my world And here within my space .............................................. .............................................. I’ll never let you go You’ll always be right here with me......... Beautiful. You may read my poem LIVE IN YOU

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John Brown 18 March 2014

Beautiful, as ever, and well written.

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Neela Nath Das 09 March 2014

Val, we believe that body perishes but soul exists.So, he is always with you.Beautiful verse!

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Dee Corpolongo 08 March 2014

oh Val, this is so beautiful and has brought tears to my eyes. I know the pain in losing loved ones, more than I care to think about, but losing someone who has been so much apart of your life, your soul mate, is devastating. You are such a great and much loved woman. I send you {{{hugs}}} with lots of love......always. Thank you for this beautiful poem.

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