M.D Dinesh Nair

Freshman - 1,554 Points (Thrissur/Vijayawada)

CAN STREAMS FLOW ALONG THE RIVER SIDES?


Can the streams run up to the oceans far?
Can they run along the side of the rivers known?

You were a river and I a stream
Who flowed together once.

Using the sixth sense I read your mind
The one none could read before.
Each line written on your mind
Unveiled a portrait painted never.

You were a river and I a stream..

Aside my failing senses old
Triumphed my sixth sense young.
You, the river got flooded
And I, the stream was drowned.

Denouncing the last reason left you kept even my soul off-
An act someone else could have done.
Each word spoken at my funeral often
Unravelled the mystery of your mind.

Along the side of the river of your ego,
May I flow as a stream entwining you ever in the next life too?

Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 3,082 Points Valerie Dohren (6/17/2013 1:21:00 PM)

    A river is wide, stream is small in comparison, but the two often come together as one. Very good write Dinesh, enjoyed reading. (Report) Reply

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