Maia Padua

Rookie - 121 Points (Virgo / City of Gentle People)

Can I Have You? - Poem by Maia Padua

Dreams falling like beads from heaven
Scattered like dew carpeting the meadow
Waiting for a new dawn to kiss goodbye
Echoes heard from a lonely mountain
The deafening truth, hurting vain.

Love is gone?
Love slowly fades away?
Those lovely eyes, soothing looks
Those inviting lips, sweet smiles
Vanish like rainbow in the sky
Vanish like fog as fire slowly dies.

Are my tears not enough to melt your heart?
Are my prayers not enough to be heard by God?
When will these tears stop from falling?
When will be my prayers be answered?
Until, there will be no more tears to cry?
Or, until my weeping heart slowly dies?

Will I go on chasing rainbows in the sky?
Will there be an end of the lonely echoes of my heart's cry?
Will I ever learn to live with it?
Will I ever learn to live without you?

So many questions were made
So many questions remain unanswered
When my heart only ask for one;
'Can I have you in my life? '

Dedicated to my friend...Macel S.

Comments about Can I Have You? by Maia Padua

  • Veteran Poet - 1,312 Points Leslie Philibert (2/13/2015 11:15:00 AM)

    Some good ideas, but this needs a re-write, lots of strange syntax here.... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 26,074 Points Kim Barney (2/13/2015 9:31:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem marred by very few punctuation and grammar mistakes. Congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (2/13/2015 5:41:00 AM)

    Nice poem con rates tears spear soul and body, .., (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 61 Points Rajesh Natamsha (2/13/2015 2:43:00 AM)

    Nice poem Maia. I overwhelmed. Thank you! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 25, 2011

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