Can I? Poem by Heather Burns

Can I?

Rating: 5.0


Can I write a verse,
In the early dawn?

Can I find the courage,
to somehow carry on?

Can I walk in meadows
green beneath my feet?

Can I smell the flowers
growing wild and sweet?

Can I find the secret as
I explore?

The secret I am seeking,
will open up life's door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2018

Surely you can, dear Heather, since we as human will do things that are hidden and we will be looking for it till we find it, especially because it will open up life´s door. A 10 and much more for the vote.

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Michelle Robertson 26 April 2018

AWESOME! Absolutely in touch with humanity here.

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Doug Bentley 13 July 2013

You challenge sensations at the raw edge, that razor-edge where there's so much known to lose, so much unknown to gain. Yes, I think - You Can!

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