Kaila George

Rookie - 740 Points (20 October 1962 / New Zealand)

Can He Really See What I See


The night sky shone of glittering stars
as she gazed upon the splendor
and wondered does my true love
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  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (6/9/2014 11:35:00 AM)

    I would venture to say if the person is with you absolutely.
    Enjoyed this work keep smiling and wishing on stars. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,435 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (6/9/2014 9:38:00 AM)

    Expression of the deep love in such a good poem and it is nice. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,035 Points Francis Lynch (6/9/2014 9:13:00 AM)

    Nice write. Economy of words and words working hard. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,290 Points Soumita Sarkar (6/9/2014 1:51:00 AM)

    Nice write...good flow..................blank verse. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,849 Points Kevin Patrick (6/10/2013 10:32:00 PM)

    I'm glad this was poem of the day Kaila its one of your best! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,053 Points Godfrey Morris (6/9/2013 8:01:00 PM)

    Great poem Kaila. Love the descriptions and strong emotions conveyed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (6/9/2013 5:14:00 AM)

    a good poem that deserves to be poem of the day. It might be worth using a question mark,
    Can He Really See What I See? is grammatically a question... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,849 Points Kevin Patrick (6/12/2012 9:54:00 PM)

    This is a picture of pure phantasmagorical elegance, its accentuated with romantic innocents that it puts me in the mind of where you are. Its seems simplistic but the feelings you posses are complex and intricate, even if your lover does not see the stars, then he should understand your words. Great stuff (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Besa Dede (6/10/2012 11:09:00 AM)

    Very lovely poem, full of description and feeling. I like the way the poem is composed; it has a natural and continuous flow, making the reader enjoy the depiction of the narration. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.
    Warm regards,

    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anita Sehgal (6/10/2012 6:11:00 AM)

    very nicely expressed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Justin Opmeer (6/9/2012 9:45:00 AM)

    Poetry as it's supposed to be. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sharad Juneja (6/9/2012 9:33:00 AM)

    Kaila beautiful... right from the word go...fantastic :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 218 Points Manonton Dalan (6/9/2012 1:03:00 AM)

    probably not but he cares (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,375 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (6/9/2012 12:54:00 AM)

    Nature presented well with the passion of sharing beauty with the beloved one. Well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Simon Collins (5/23/2012 10:55:00 PM)

    Really touching poem, deep, thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (11/16/2011 12:38:00 PM)

    Dear Sister of My Soul.....you have written my heart to the universe...hugs you so tight.....so wonderful to read your works....love you my sister. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (11/15/2011 9:41:00 PM)

    You really have presented to the Poetry World a reservoir of beautiful and penning words that clearly manifests your great poetic talent! Great job done here! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ God Bless You for always and keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City... (Report) Reply



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