Calling Poem by Marton Dezso

Calling

Rating: 3.1


Dirty mouths and dirty soles
Dirt between fingers
Dirt under nails
Skin and bones
Broken glass everywhere
Windows doors frames
Heat trams and subways
Cars moving slow
Cars moving fast
Cars parking
Men in blue with
Checks in yellow walking
Thirsty. Starving.
Get off. Get on. Go or stay.
Here and there. Up and down: Away
Faces. One. Many. Mine, theirs: Any.
Child's dream soft, mother's breathing heavy.
Beggars. Give.
Jobless, homeless, sick and stinking.
Money smoke money
Money for drink
Money for smoke for money.
Cars again. Sound of horns.
Outside noise. Inside noise.
Agony in every voice. Boring.
Growing tired. Calling silent
Calling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Martin, You have captured so much in this frantic style of writing and it is just so creative. I felt compelled to read down the page and the images came out to me thick and fast. Well contrived and skillfully written. 10 Karin

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rago rago 31 July 2009

let we immerse in silence........ and we will be in great lines..........

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 28 July 2009

Agony in every voice. Boring. Growing tired. Calling silent Calling. great job, You are doing great really....

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