Called On The Rug... [limerick (Short, Of Course): Humor; Thanks To P H Member M. Asim Nehal] Poem by Bri Edwards

Called On The Rug... [limerick (Short, Of Course): Humor; Thanks To P H Member M. Asim Nehal]

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A man called his wife for a hug.
“ I love you but there is a bug” …
came my wife’s reply.
And as much …..as I did try,
she would not lie with me on our rug!

Friday, October 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humor
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In: Limerick - 1 - Poem by M. Asim Nehal, the poet uses some of the same wording; actually, i stole some words from him. i hope he forgives me! ! ! of course i plan to share any monetary gain i get from my poem.......with him.

thank you, M. Asim Nehal!
bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 23 October 2015

Hey Bri. I am with your wife, the thought of a bug crawling would ruin the moment. But if you were super keen you could have had a quick clean.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 27 July 2023

Nice, rhyming humorous poem. I agree with your wife. Thanks for sharing. : -)

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Mj Lemon 06 November 2015

A great piece....But I'm not really clear. Does the bug belong to an entomologist, or in a From Russia with Love plot line?

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Valsa George 03 November 2015

Ha..... ha! Hug and bug do not go together! ! Either kill the bug or remove the rug!

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Eugene Levich 24 October 2015

What's wrong with bugs? Is your wife a racist?

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Loke Kok Yee 24 October 2015

Now that really sucks Maybe next time you'll have better luck Thanks Bri-10++

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