California Poem by zamarra venus

California

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In California we like to eat oranges
The Mountains are stately and purple
The broad ocean shines silver
We enjoy the sun every day of the month
But nothing rhymes with oranges, purple, silver, or month,
So this poem just died.
(Check for yourself.)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Douglas Scotney 28 February 2013

what about onth upon a time? Sick old guy, 'I've been illver years.' Wyatt Earp'll be seen in purple, Before Ange will get me an orange?

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Gajanan Mishra 28 February 2013

Beautiful picture. I like it. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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