Susanta Pattnayak

Rookie (Bhubaneswar, India)

Caged Dreams - Poem by Susanta Pattnayak

She dreams, no more.
The rise and the fall of the waves,
the dancing of the breeze,
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Comments about Caged Dreams by Susanta Pattnayak

  • Gold Star - 27,101 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/7/2014 10:38:00 PM)

    An enchanting and mesmerizing poem that touches the heart. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,641 Points Savita Tyagi (9/7/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. I feel her pain in each word. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,788 Points Lyn Paul (9/7/2014 5:23:00 PM)

    Such beautiful words yet so much pain expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,199 Points Chinedu Dike (9/7/2014 12:44:00 PM)

    My favourite expression is...the strength of the invisible, the powers of the inaccessible... A good piece. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (9/7/2014 12:01:00 PM)

    I do hope, Susanta, that she gets freed from the cage and her dreams are translated into reality very soon... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,089 Points Mohammad Skati (9/7/2014 10:10:00 AM)

    She stopped dreaming about real things, then she moved to the incredible dreams.... It's a great transformation of one's dreams from a case into another case. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,239 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (9/7/2014 2:12:00 AM)

    Innumerable facets to think of, feel, work with, and be concerned about with love. How wonderfully and humanely one viewed a girl who face d caging, by some force against it. Very touching. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,299 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/7/2014 1:47:00 AM)

    she was passed from hand to hand
    for mere amusement and joy.

    seems to be too sad, but she has to come out of it, instead of trying to rest beside her mother.

    any way congratulations Susanta Pattnayak..Keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,578 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/28/2014 10:17:00 AM)

    eternally till eternity, very fine, I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rituparna Sen (9/7/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    Nicely done. Liked it. Good job. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sajad Meer (9/7/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    Poetic Beauty: She returns to hope , though late! Wonderfull! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Meera Panigrahi (9/8/2012 2:15:00 AM)

    There is a sense of defeat in the lines and the urge to escape (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (9/7/2012 11:21:00 PM)

    well written. desperation seeking release from what seems eternal pain. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 879 Points Leslie Philibert (9/7/2012 10:53:00 AM)

    Well written with a lot of big images. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Anita Sehgal (9/7/2012 8:35:00 AM)

    very beautiful ... poignant! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,727 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (9/7/2012 12:45:00 AM)

    It can be considered as a cage song. Well. (Report) Reply










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