Cagayan De Oro In Rain Poem by Cyrus Diaz

Cagayan De Oro In Rain

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On 16nth day of December
I, alone hear voices
in distance,
rising - falling.
pray for the drowning
city, to keep time
with our peculiar
fate, we try to be
part of what we don't
fully comprehend,
soon we'll sleep
or soon will die
and dream of our
own city in a small
corner of its horizon
lights by the sky,
inevitable, cold
the tremor of the night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joey Valenzuela 29 December 2012

well penned... the imagery is vivid... nice conclusion. though i didnt like much the first line, its still good as a whole..

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Ency Bearis 13 January 2012

Oh, such a heart rending tragedy that happened there in that area, and you expressed well the fear during that time poetically, nice write.

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