(c) 32 (Life/Philosophy) A New World Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(c) 32 (Life/Philosophy) A New World

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Lets create a new world
Everything new will be unfurled
Where theres no You or Me
A revolt against conformity
A revolt against respectability
A revolt against mediocrity
A brand new society
Where the soul is free
Not tied by influence
Not tied by experience
Or what the neighbour thinks
No interference
No tradition
No fears to decay
Where creativity emerges
Free thoughts play
A new civilization
A new way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 10 September 2007

My Response TO: A New World Where is that world that He made for me? There was unfolded everything that’s new! I was not I and you were not you; Orthodoxy, propriety and weakness - Needed no rebellion, no uprising! A league so fresh and novel, new-fangled! Where the essence was freed – Unbounded to authority & knowledge; Careless to the neighborhood rumors – Without any meddling or rituals; Devoid of the horror of moldering - Where ingenuity surfaced with no effort; And the reflections of freedom abound Where is that world that He made for me? There was unfolded everything that’s new!

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 10 December 2006

ok... when and where... you can count me in! nice write. -Eila

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 December 2006

OK...When can we start? ! A fine concept & penning in true, my dear....Spot-On in purpose & sublimity...fjr

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Catastrophe King 10 December 2006

Simply super! TO, you are the new generation poet..... I applaud all your efforts! They are all worth the time spent here...... keep writing!

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